Friday, 4 April 2014

feedback for front cover, content and double page spread

Updated Front Cover

Comparison
"The white background behind the whole content of the front cover is a great improvement"- Emila

Updated
"The use and display of the chosen colour scheme flows well throughout the content, font and clothing of the model"- Robert

Updated Contents 

Comparison
"The page layout is better balanced when compared to the original copy in terms of use of space. The images and text blocks are more evenly displayed"- Lee

Updated
"Really like the use of social media links to give the reader a broader experience"- Kirstie

Updated double page spread

Comparison 
"The changing of the font makes the article look more formal and clearer to read"-Richard

Updated
"Good use of image layout and Pull-out quote to break up the text"-Lilly 


Using the data from the feedback collected, it is clear to deduce that the improvements made to Good Vibes magazine were for the better; in particular, the feedback regarding the white space on the cover, was something I made sure was consistent throughout.


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